Tuesday, February 11, 2014

A moment in time

I heard Pipi panting as we walked along in the sand.

I heard another dog bark from across the beach.

I saw the dog straining on it’s leash.

I saw the deep paw marks it made in the sand as it came closer.

I felt Pipi starting to strain on her leash as well.

I felt her starting to shake and yelp.

I wondered if the dog would bite Pipi straight away.

I wondered if they would fight when they sniffed noses.

6 comments:

  1. A great snapshot of a sneak moment with Pipi! A very captivating story Greta! Dad.

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  2. Hey greta! remeber me? Its cam! i relly like your poem about the beach it liked it how you described everything that happend! Hows school and i hope you have a fab time!

    Cam S :3 hope you can email me back or comment on my new blog!?
    camshni.blogspot.co.nz
    Cameron.sewell@hni.school.nz

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  3. Nice poem Greta i liked how you used all those words keep up the good work

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  4. Nice job Greta.
    I can just imagine how you felt at that moment.
    Keep up the good work!

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  5. Awesome Poem Greta great Vocab Keep up the great work
    JEWELL

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  6. Very clever poem, I could see this happening in my minds eye, well done!

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